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Your love is as sweet as the sugar,                    That  I've been addictively indulging,              For so many years.         *Every piece of you,                       Is just the most gratifying that I have tasted!*                                    But when together we've been drowned with tribulations,                                     You just gave up rapidly... And dissolved!                                    *Integrating and going with the flow,                          Of those torments and allurements,* Now where are you? You are now a part of those afflictions that drowned you,                                             I can still taste your sweetness,                       *Every time I sip through the trials,                                 That we've face,           Resulting to weaken your knees,     And been defeated,*        I was totally in great pain,         To know that your love, Can be just greatly surmounted,                             By miseries in life, But what can I do?                                             I fight, you relinquish, And until then, You just become a memory, Of an achingly baleful chronicles of my life.              © Earl Jane                          ♥ E.J.C.S.
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Jul 24, 2015
Jul 24, 2015 at 8:05 PM UTC
Dissolving Sugar
Your love is as sweet as the sugar,                    That  I've been addictively indulging,              For so many years.         *Every piece of you,                       Is just the most gratifying that I have tasted!*                                    But when together we've been drowned with tribulations,                                     You just gave up rapidly... And dissolved!                                    *Integrating and going with the flow,                          Of those torments and allurements,* Now where are you? You are now a part of those afflictions that drowned you,                                             I can still taste your sweetness,                       *Every time I sip through the trials,                                 That we've face,           Resulting to weaken your knees,     And been defeated,*        I was totally in great pain,         To know that your love, Can be just greatly surmounted,                             By miseries in life, But what can I do?                                             I fight, you relinquish, And until then, You just become a memory, Of an achingly baleful chronicles of my life.              © Earl Jane                          ♥ E.J.C.S.
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Jul 24, 2015
Jul 24, 2015 at 8:05 PM UTC
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