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Dear Sun,  You whipped my brow  With your lashes of heat  You made my mood sour  Your shadow burnt my feet  So now you owe me  Good, I'm glad we both agree  After wearing me out today  I ask in good faith  As you go your way  In your steady gait  Take this message for me  To my friend beyond the sea  Tell him to come back to me  I miss him so much already  My smiles have become very few  And I'm always sad, always blue  All I have left of him are  memories  That keep me in constant  reveries  Be kind Sun, be kind to him  Give him only warmth, don't  burn his skin  Don't forget to tell him all I said  And tomorrow when I get up  from bed  I await his reply from you  And I hope it's favourable too.
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Jul 24, 2015
Jul 24, 2015 at 7:13 PM UTC
Be Kind, Sun
Dear Sun,  You whipped my brow  With your lashes of heat  You made my mood sour  Your shadow burnt my feet  So now you owe me  Good, I'm glad we both agree  After wearing me out today  I ask in good faith  As you go your way  In your steady gait  Take this message for me  To my friend beyond the sea  Tell him to come back to me  I miss him so much already  My smiles have become very few  And I'm always sad, always blue  All I have left of him are  memories  That keep me in constant  reveries  Be kind Sun, be kind to him  Give him only warmth, don't  burn his skin  Don't forget to tell him all I said  And tomorrow when I get up  from bed  I await his reply from you  And I hope it's favourable too.
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Jul 24, 2015
Jul 24, 2015 at 7:13 PM UTC
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