Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
Once upon a time, There was me and you, We were each other’s half – A perfect match. As I lay my head on your shoulder, You wrap me in your arms; Our hands entwined Sharing sweet laughters. All those moments we spent together We decided to make it last; My hope of our forever Will be up high til' we turn to dust. When you decided to love me so, My heart was ever glad; You and me just like that… Inlove... Unified.*
0
Jul 24, 2015
Jul 24, 2015 at 11:35 AM UTC
Changed (Collab with Hyacinth)
Once upon a time, There was me and you, We were each other’s half – A perfect match. As I lay my head on your shoulder, You wrap me in your arms; Our hands entwined Sharing sweet laughters. All those moments we spent together We decided to make it last; My hope of our forever Will be up high til' we turn to dust. When you decided to love me so, My heart was ever glad; You and me just like that… Inlove... Unified.*
The last two stanzas of my poem should be this: All those moments we spent together Will just be part of our past; My hope of our forever Vanished like dust. When you decided to let me go, My heart was shattered; You left me just like that… Weeping... Broken. But before I posted this, I sent this first to Mr. Hyacinth. Then, he created a new ending for my poem that's why this became a collab :) He wrote the other side of my poem. Thanks for reading ;) ©Blythe ©Hyacinth
blythe
Written by
16/F
Jul 24, 2015
Jul 24, 2015 at 11:35 AM UTC
Request permission to use this poem