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When I lived on Venice Beach my nickname was “Smiley” because I smiled at everyone When I lived in Luxembourg I was not understood because I smiled at everyone When I was a child my mother made a game of smiling and when she saw someone unhappy on the street or in their car she would smile at them until they finally smiled back and only rarely did her efforts fail I have been considered shallow by those who never knew me because I smile at everyone but those people have no clue how much inner strength those smiles represent
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Jun 28, 2015
Jun 28, 2015 at 11:13 PM UTC
Smiles
When I lived on Venice Beach my nickname was “Smiley” because I smiled at everyone When I lived in Luxembourg I was not understood because I smiled at everyone When I was a child my mother made a game of smiling and when she saw someone unhappy on the street or in their car she would smile at them until they finally smiled back and only rarely did her efforts fail I have been considered shallow by those who never knew me because I smile at everyone but those people have no clue how much inner strength those smiles represent
Written 20150628 in response to the excellent poem, "Broken Shadow," by Rare But Relevant: http://hellopoetry.com/poem/1244771/broken-shadow/ Thanks for the inspiration!
cori-macnaughton
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Jun 28, 2015
Jun 28, 2015 at 11:13 PM UTC
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