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the revolution, or should I say, the American one, was such a beautiful time because it was last era were hope persisted in this world though they knew times were not getting better, they knew that their children, or the child’s children, or the child’s children’s offspring, would one day inherit the beauty of this world those men in ***** wigs and uncomfortable cotton could believe like few others in history sure, some might say the french, in their coup d’état, had as much or more vigor as their American peers, but as I recall, their fervor would turn on them and consume them like a fire burning out of control some too argue that the generations following the fathers, those trekking out the western frontiers, those going off to the civil, the first, and the second world wars were just as brave and yes they were brave they were brave indeed but they were not filled with hope they did not expect to win they expected to die they expected to fail to lose, to go down in history as nothing and that was enough for them but not Washington not Jefferson, not Madison, not Adams, not Hamilton, not Franklin. they weren’t in it for history, they were in it for the future for the history of the day after tomorrow they fought because they knew they could win until today this optimism had died until today, when I, looking into the future and seeing nothing, still smile, there was no one who truly understood that life is not about living it is about the lives that go on living after you
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Sep 11, 2011
Sep 11, 2011 at 10:07 PM UTC
a greater kind of bravery
the revolution, or should I say, the American one, was such a beautiful time because it was last era were hope persisted in this world though they knew times were not getting better, they knew that their children, or the child’s children, or the child’s children’s offspring, would one day inherit the beauty of this world those men in ***** wigs and uncomfortable cotton could believe like few others in history sure, some might say the french, in their coup d’état, had as much or more vigor as their American peers, but as I recall, their fervor would turn on them and consume them like a fire burning out of control some too argue that the generations following the fathers, those trekking out the western frontiers, those going off to the civil, the first, and the second world wars were just as brave and yes they were brave they were brave indeed but they were not filled with hope they did not expect to win they expected to die they expected to fail to lose, to go down in history as nothing and that was enough for them but not Washington not Jefferson, not Madison, not Adams, not Hamilton, not Franklin. they weren’t in it for history, they were in it for the future for the history of the day after tomorrow they fought because they knew they could win until today this optimism had died until today, when I, looking into the future and seeing nothing, still smile, there was no one who truly understood that life is not about living it is about the lives that go on living after you
wave-break
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Sep 11, 2011
Sep 11, 2011 at 10:07 PM UTC
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