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The soft padding of my running feet, Rhythmically ran at a hypnotic beat. My legs moved smoothly, forward and back Propelling me faster, across the race track. A quick glance behind showed that I was in lead, While the rest of the group tried to quicken their speed. I focused my run, tried to steady my pace, I’d a long ways to go, had a long run to race. When all of a sudden I spotted near my side, A quick paced runner, with a long-legged stride. He smiled at me like he’d already won, Yet he looked really happy, like this was great fun! I smoldered inside cause I had to win, Not some dumb idiot with a stupid looking grin! I ran ever faster and soon was ahead, Yet the long-legged runner just laughed and then sped. And once again he was in lead of the group, My body felt exhausted and I started to droop. This wasn’t fair; I had to get past him! Though my lungs were burning and my eyesight was dim. I barely even noticed when he ran o’er the line, To win the race, which should have been mine. I realized with a start as I gasped for air, That though he’d won the race I didn’t even care. What mattered was that the race had been fun, And now it was over, now it was done. The thought made me smile put a laugh to my lips, While I opened my water container and took a few sips. It wasn’t about competing; I didn’t care if he’d won, All that really mattered was that I'd had fun!
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Sep 11, 2011
Sep 11, 2011 at 3:33 PM UTC
Competition
The soft padding of my running feet, Rhythmically ran at a hypnotic beat. My legs moved smoothly, forward and back Propelling me faster, across the race track. A quick glance behind showed that I was in lead, While the rest of the group tried to quicken their speed. I focused my run, tried to steady my pace, I’d a long ways to go, had a long run to race. When all of a sudden I spotted near my side, A quick paced runner, with a long-legged stride. He smiled at me like he’d already won, Yet he looked really happy, like this was great fun! I smoldered inside cause I had to win, Not some dumb idiot with a stupid looking grin! I ran ever faster and soon was ahead, Yet the long-legged runner just laughed and then sped. And once again he was in lead of the group, My body felt exhausted and I started to droop. This wasn’t fair; I had to get past him! Though my lungs were burning and my eyesight was dim. I barely even noticed when he ran o’er the line, To win the race, which should have been mine. I realized with a start as I gasped for air, That though he’d won the race I didn’t even care. What mattered was that the race had been fun, And now it was over, now it was done. The thought made me smile put a laugh to my lips, While I opened my water container and took a few sips. It wasn’t about competing; I didn’t care if he’d won, All that really mattered was that I'd had fun!
This was one of the first poems I wrote, and I decided to put it up on the website! It's different than most of my poetry in that it's very light and comedic, although it does have a message in it! I hope you enjoy!
julian-mullins
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Sep 11, 2011
Sep 11, 2011 at 3:33 PM UTC
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