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Does the sun set and rise or simply realign? The tiny moments between inhale and exhale is that what it feels like to die? trapped inside for the rest of time. For, there is a certain allusion of bliss under all this nothingness. a certain appeal and comfort inside unaware unconsciousness. all of you search for answers turning your faces up to the sky crying all your woes & dreams constantly asking why I'm not looking for answers, I have no reason to cry. For all of you are waiting to live, as I, am waiting to die.
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Jun 25, 2015
Jun 25, 2015 at 11:17 AM UTC
Life at a Glance
Does the sun set and rise or simply realign? The tiny moments between inhale and exhale is that what it feels like to die? trapped inside for the rest of time. For, there is a certain allusion of bliss under all this nothingness. a certain appeal and comfort inside unaware unconsciousness. all of you search for answers turning your faces up to the sky crying all your woes & dreams constantly asking why I'm not looking for answers, I have no reason to cry. For all of you are waiting to live, as I, am waiting to die.
What are you waiting for? Go on and do something about it or accept the fate you've chosen. Allusion= the reference of bliss under all the sorrow- to all you English grammer checking nazis
biyoekii
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28/F/Canadian
Jun 25, 2015
Jun 25, 2015 at 11:17 AM UTC
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