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i'd like to suggest a new lesson for kids to learn to write about heartbreak; and how to navigate the waters and chop down the saplings that grew from the precious seeds of promises that we planted in the warm dirt that stained our shirts and a chapter about hurt about how it's coming but it's ok cause there was never a question about how much he loved you it's just that we were too young to hold up our expectations and too blind to see the faults that cracked open to reveal our cowardice that we filled in with volume, growing louder with every tremor i didn't mean to tie you down but my hair is so long that sometimes even I get caught up in it I want to write you a chapter of apologies in any language you can understand I'll bind it with maturity and print it on parchment so you know that it is not to be taken lightly the heirarchy of words is so hard to uncover I know that my blunders are what you heard and my heart is what you missed
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Sep 3, 2011
Sep 3, 2011 at 6:59 PM UTC
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i'd like to suggest a new lesson for kids to learn to write about heartbreak; and how to navigate the waters and chop down the saplings that grew from the precious seeds of promises that we planted in the warm dirt that stained our shirts and a chapter about hurt about how it's coming but it's ok cause there was never a question about how much he loved you it's just that we were too young to hold up our expectations and too blind to see the faults that cracked open to reveal our cowardice that we filled in with volume, growing louder with every tremor i didn't mean to tie you down but my hair is so long that sometimes even I get caught up in it I want to write you a chapter of apologies in any language you can understand I'll bind it with maturity and print it on parchment so you know that it is not to be taken lightly the heirarchy of words is so hard to uncover I know that my blunders are what you heard and my heart is what you missed
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Sep 3, 2011
Sep 3, 2011 at 6:59 PM UTC
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