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Lydia and I ride a train from the Elephant & Castle to Victoria train station we love the smell of the steam train that takes us there the white and grey smoke passes by the train window what did your mum say when you asked about going to Victoria with me? I ask Lydia says she looked at me as if I’d farted then said asked your father so I did and he said -being sober and in a good mood- don't you two go and elope away together at least not until you're 16 years old and he laughed and Mum just raised her eyebrows and tut-tutted and Dad said mind how you go with that Benny boy she smiles and I take in her straight cut hair and the dull green dress and grey cardigan that's good I say I like it when she's happy and we get out at Victoria and walk along to the nearest seat and sit down to watch the steam trains coming and going maybe I’ll be a train driver when I’m older I say to be able to breathe in the smell of steam trains and the sound of trains and see them Lydia says black ones and blue ones and green ones maybe I can be a train driver too she adds do you think so? yes that'd be good I say we can go off to Scotland and see the big castle and see men in kilts she says we watch as the steam train takes off the power of the train the puff and shush and shush and she takes my hand and it's warm on this little date us two kids of 8.
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Jun 12, 2015
Jun 12, 2015 at 4:11 PM UTC
TICKET TO RIDE.
Lydia and I ride a train from the Elephant & Castle to Victoria train station we love the smell of the steam train that takes us there the white and grey smoke passes by the train window what did your mum say when you asked about going to Victoria with me? I ask Lydia says she looked at me as if I’d farted then said asked your father so I did and he said -being sober and in a good mood- don't you two go and elope away together at least not until you're 16 years old and he laughed and Mum just raised her eyebrows and tut-tutted and Dad said mind how you go with that Benny boy she smiles and I take in her straight cut hair and the dull green dress and grey cardigan that's good I say I like it when she's happy and we get out at Victoria and walk along to the nearest seat and sit down to watch the steam trains coming and going maybe I’ll be a train driver when I’m older I say to be able to breathe in the smell of steam trains and the sound of trains and see them Lydia says black ones and blue ones and green ones maybe I can be a train driver too she adds do you think so? yes that'd be good I say we can go off to Scotland and see the big castle and see men in kilts she says we watch as the steam train takes off the power of the train the puff and shush and shush and she takes my hand and it's warm on this little date us two kids of 8.
A BOY AND GIRL IN LONDON IN 1950S WATCHING TRAINS.
terry-collett
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Jun 12, 2015
Jun 12, 2015 at 4:11 PM UTC
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