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I remember wondering through the store, looking for just the right shirt. I remember arriving an hour early, sitting on a bench alone. I remember seeing you arrive, the butterflies in my stomach held their breath, my breathing got heavy as the world stood still, you look so beautiful. I remember the air feeling different when the slow song started, rushing to find you as the room slowed down. I remember you gently holding my left hand, leading me to a quiet corner of the dance floor. I remember your hand on my shoulder, my hand on your lower back, I remember the noisy room, and all I could hear was you breathing on my chest. I remember pulling you closer to my body, I remember you doing the same, a second later. I wanted the song to play forever, but it was gone in a nervous, shallow breath. I remember nothing The evening was over, it's been over for 8 years. My butterflies still hold their breath, you still look so beautiful. -duncan
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Jun 10, 2015
Jun 10, 2015 at 6:11 PM UTC
We were so young
I remember wondering through the store, looking for just the right shirt. I remember arriving an hour early, sitting on a bench alone. I remember seeing you arrive, the butterflies in my stomach held their breath, my breathing got heavy as the world stood still, you look so beautiful. I remember the air feeling different when the slow song started, rushing to find you as the room slowed down. I remember you gently holding my left hand, leading me to a quiet corner of the dance floor. I remember your hand on my shoulder, my hand on your lower back, I remember the noisy room, and all I could hear was you breathing on my chest. I remember pulling you closer to my body, I remember you doing the same, a second later. I wanted the song to play forever, but it was gone in a nervous, shallow breath. I remember nothing The evening was over, it's been over for 8 years. My butterflies still hold their breath, you still look so beautiful. -duncan
Something I think about quite often. Maybe you relate?
duncan
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Jun 10, 2015
Jun 10, 2015 at 6:11 PM UTC
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