Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
To begin: a poem entitled “Lines to Serve as an Introduction to the Show, Written for the Lowest Common Denominator; Hastily Amended to Address our Pale Horse Future” There are no literary devices in this poem no simile, no apostrophe- there's no dissonance, no assonance, no distancing my consonants, in constellations of conversation, an astronomic lack of conjugation- there's no elevation in the elongation of thoughts- With this piece, my synaptocratic, idiosyncratic oath I recants. I'm just a guy quick-drawing inspirado from the sky, full clouds and dark wishes, kisses from other's Mrs' red wine and all that comes after. The truth's in repetition, the revolution of the wheel, all art's born of friction. Hell, God said 'Creation is lonely work,' and on the eighth day, hoping hands will hold flimsy dishes, he filled us with desperate artist wishes- Sad, bold lumps of clay rising like Play-doe, hell, ask Plato, we're forms arriving at the real manifest desk in a city, where writers write dying, praying for real forms arising, just in time for the plying of fact in layers peeled back, while cracks in the truth erode faith from way back- Stopped dead in their tracks, feel like thieves who steal moves, but the ecstatic hack, the stark raving yet pragmatic hack will still muse; muse for the muse and on the grandest conquest will invest, digress, come upon an ingress and disappear into a land beyond the beyond. All in search of the mustang ***** who won't ever wear a saddle- I've met the muse She was the queen in the land of the blind and what she lacked in depth perception she exploded in all the truths of all the world because to her all truth appeared equidistant So I met her for a simile, but missing an I all she could offer was a smile but it was she who taught me the demography of cool “artists create from nothingness” she told me “and so when they begin it is with nothing, so they live among Ginsberg's ***** streets where the rents cheap and they chip away at the void until where once nothing now is something”. “Remember,” she said, “creation is lonely work but once created celebration demands a crowd; so those with nothing are surrounded by those who need something; something to fill the emptiness they cannot fill themselves. But the crowd ***** the creator dry and like weeds temples to the boring emerge on those once ***** streets and the artists still have nothing and now need something to stay – but with nothing they are forced to move: move on, move out, move away, leaving behind those who only know how to follow to lead”. **** slick, you're sly, you heard my simile- in a piece that promised no imagery, and that wasn't the only one... Do I contradict myself? Abso-simile-lutely This realm is rife with ******** platitudes and be sure, this poem here contains a multitude We have many names on the list, some you've forgotten, some you've missed: I'm sorry Lawrence Ferlinghetti we here ain't getting any closer to a rebirth of wonder I'm sorry Jack Kerouac there ain't no going back on the road when your directions start with you are here and here is a windowless room I'm sorry Billy Burroughs the algebra of need is thorough but ours increases not geometric but exponentially We have many names on the list. some you've forgotten, some you've missed Beat.
0
Jun 1, 2015
Jun 1, 2015 at 11:53 AM UTC
Missing Beat
To begin: a poem entitled “Lines to Serve as an Introduction to the Show, Written for the Lowest Common Denominator; Hastily Amended to Address our Pale Horse Future” There are no literary devices in this poem no simile, no apostrophe- there's no dissonance, no assonance, no distancing my consonants, in constellations of conversation, an astronomic lack of conjugation- there's no elevation in the elongation of thoughts- With this piece, my synaptocratic, idiosyncratic oath I recants. I'm just a guy quick-drawing inspirado from the sky, full clouds and dark wishes, kisses from other's Mrs' red wine and all that comes after. The truth's in repetition, the revolution of the wheel, all art's born of friction. Hell, God said 'Creation is lonely work,' and on the eighth day, hoping hands will hold flimsy dishes, he filled us with desperate artist wishes- Sad, bold lumps of clay rising like Play-doe, hell, ask Plato, we're forms arriving at the real manifest desk in a city, where writers write dying, praying for real forms arising, just in time for the plying of fact in layers peeled back, while cracks in the truth erode faith from way back- Stopped dead in their tracks, feel like thieves who steal moves, but the ecstatic hack, the stark raving yet pragmatic hack will still muse; muse for the muse and on the grandest conquest will invest, digress, come upon an ingress and disappear into a land beyond the beyond. All in search of the mustang ***** who won't ever wear a saddle- I've met the muse She was the queen in the land of the blind and what she lacked in depth perception she exploded in all the truths of all the world because to her all truth appeared equidistant So I met her for a simile, but missing an I all she could offer was a smile but it was she who taught me the demography of cool “artists create from nothingness” she told me “and so when they begin it is with nothing, so they live among Ginsberg's ***** streets where the rents cheap and they chip away at the void until where once nothing now is something”. “Remember,” she said, “creation is lonely work but once created celebration demands a crowd; so those with nothing are surrounded by those who need something; something to fill the emptiness they cannot fill themselves. But the crowd ***** the creator dry and like weeds temples to the boring emerge on those once ***** streets and the artists still have nothing and now need something to stay – but with nothing they are forced to move: move on, move out, move away, leaving behind those who only know how to follow to lead”. **** slick, you're sly, you heard my simile- in a piece that promised no imagery, and that wasn't the only one... Do I contradict myself? Abso-simile-lutely This realm is rife with ******** platitudes and be sure, this poem here contains a multitude We have many names on the list, some you've forgotten, some you've missed: I'm sorry Lawrence Ferlinghetti we here ain't getting any closer to a rebirth of wonder I'm sorry Jack Kerouac there ain't no going back on the road when your directions start with you are here and here is a windowless room I'm sorry Billy Burroughs the algebra of need is thorough but ours increases not geometric but exponentially We have many names on the list. some you've forgotten, some you've missed Beat.
samuel-butcher
Written by
Jun 1, 2015
Jun 1, 2015 at 11:53 AM UTC
Request permission to use this poem