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they told me to go, to visit the land by the sea, and take my troubles with me - I asked "why?" and they just shook their heads. i went my own way, and left my troubles behind me, littering the places of my life with junk i did not understand, while they shunned me. even so, i went on, my trials left a wake behind me, people, places, things i cast aside as i went, friendless and lost in the world, and i saw their pity-filled eyes, but they would not speak to me. at long last, my path led me to the sea, its force and power unmistakable, for it had not past nor future, it simply was. and it beckoned to me. i retraced my steps, picking up my castoffs, back to where i started, and they winked at me, knowing smiles playing on their lips. i took my troubles to the sea, and threw them in, myself along with them, and at last i understood, for the sea claimed all my troubles, and washed me clean. i came out of the water, and they were all there, laughing and smiling, and i was one of them again, made new by the relentless wild forgiveness of the sea.
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May 31, 2015
May 31, 2015 at 9:52 PM UTC
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they told me to go, to visit the land by the sea, and take my troubles with me - I asked "why?" and they just shook their heads. i went my own way, and left my troubles behind me, littering the places of my life with junk i did not understand, while they shunned me. even so, i went on, my trials left a wake behind me, people, places, things i cast aside as i went, friendless and lost in the world, and i saw their pity-filled eyes, but they would not speak to me. at long last, my path led me to the sea, its force and power unmistakable, for it had not past nor future, it simply was. and it beckoned to me. i retraced my steps, picking up my castoffs, back to where i started, and they winked at me, knowing smiles playing on their lips. i took my troubles to the sea, and threw them in, myself along with them, and at last i understood, for the sea claimed all my troubles, and washed me clean. i came out of the water, and they were all there, laughing and smiling, and i was one of them again, made new by the relentless wild forgiveness of the sea.
bela-matyas-feher
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May 31, 2015
May 31, 2015 at 9:52 PM UTC
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