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I thought I'd grow up and become a cloud ranger; I wasn't ready to live a life aligned. I couldn't become a fin grazer; I've barely skimmed the surface of this life. I was this synthetic stranger-- too unfamiliar with my own mind... Life was pure when it was linear And not some bird -short-lived -unbalanced -unaware -somewhere. That tore off it's own wings to land itself right here. When I couldn't see where I was going I-- believed songs. They could. --they might. tell. lies. I didn't see where I was going I I didn't think I could go that high I didn't think I could fly (What are they going to remember me by) I didn't see what was coming I I thought this song could save my eyes I was wrong. Well, Maybe I was right? Because diamonds meant more to me than saving a life. In the end, I didn't think I would become a butterfly; I thought I'd become what the airplanes leave behind.
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May 30, 2015
May 30, 2015 at 6:46 PM UTC
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I thought I'd grow up and become a cloud ranger; I wasn't ready to live a life aligned. I couldn't become a fin grazer; I've barely skimmed the surface of this life. I was this synthetic stranger-- too unfamiliar with my own mind... Life was pure when it was linear And not some bird -short-lived -unbalanced -unaware -somewhere. That tore off it's own wings to land itself right here. When I couldn't see where I was going I-- believed songs. They could. --they might. tell. lies. I didn't see where I was going I I didn't think I could go that high I didn't think I could fly (What are they going to remember me by) I didn't see what was coming I I thought this song could save my eyes I was wrong. Well, Maybe I was right? Because diamonds meant more to me than saving a life. In the end, I didn't think I would become a butterfly; I thought I'd become what the airplanes leave behind.
I posted this on DA a while ago. It's one of my better poems. A friend compared it to a bildungsroman but in poetic form. Haha!
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May 30, 2015
May 30, 2015 at 6:46 PM UTC
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