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You want me to talk, Sir? I’d relax and you can paint better, Sir? Maybe, Sir…maybe, but what shall I say, Sir? For I am not used to talking to important people like you, Sir… Why do you laugh, Sir? It is true, I’m just a girl from the village, Sir attending to Laxmi and Ganga – those are our family cows, Sir; and I milk them; and my father and I bring the milk to the market and to neighbors who can afford to pay for them… We don’t carry them in these fancy pots Sir, you make me pose with but just earthen jars, Sir… But this morning, Sir, my father said to me: *Come, Mina – you shall pose for a famous artist; India has never seen such an artist and he shall pay well and perhaps with that I shall buy a third cow; three neighbors owe us money and will never return them in this life; and the old woman in the sixth house has died owing us money for these last four years… You just have to stand there before the artist in your cleanest sari and use borrowed milk pots…* And that is what my father said, Sir… I normally don’t dress in such clean clothes, Sir; the saris I have are saris my mum used but she died when I was little, Sir… Sir? You want me to keep talking…but I am boring, Sir and I talk simple words and I am sure you’ve heard… Oh Sir, I’m more used to talking to cows than important men, Sir… All right Sir, I will tell you…I will tell you… I do have dreams, Sir and it is just the dream of all the girls in my village: I’d like new saris and jewels and I’d like to be married before the year ends; Arun from the next village always looks at me in our town fairs and Oh, would that he’d marry me and we’d have a home and a farm and cows and we’d have children and we’d live our quiet lives in our secluded village… Sir, that is my dream…I have nothing more to say, Sir… I hope you are done… Or maybe you should talk, Sir…
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Aug 7, 2011
Aug 7, 2011 at 8:55 PM UTC
The village girl models for the artist, 1904
You want me to talk, Sir? I’d relax and you can paint better, Sir? Maybe, Sir…maybe, but what shall I say, Sir? For I am not used to talking to important people like you, Sir… Why do you laugh, Sir? It is true, I’m just a girl from the village, Sir attending to Laxmi and Ganga – those are our family cows, Sir; and I milk them; and my father and I bring the milk to the market and to neighbors who can afford to pay for them… We don’t carry them in these fancy pots Sir, you make me pose with but just earthen jars, Sir… But this morning, Sir, my father said to me: *Come, Mina – you shall pose for a famous artist; India has never seen such an artist and he shall pay well and perhaps with that I shall buy a third cow; three neighbors owe us money and will never return them in this life; and the old woman in the sixth house has died owing us money for these last four years… You just have to stand there before the artist in your cleanest sari and use borrowed milk pots…* And that is what my father said, Sir… I normally don’t dress in such clean clothes, Sir; the saris I have are saris my mum used but she died when I was little, Sir… Sir? You want me to keep talking…but I am boring, Sir and I talk simple words and I am sure you’ve heard… Oh Sir, I’m more used to talking to cows than important men, Sir… All right Sir, I will tell you…I will tell you… I do have dreams, Sir and it is just the dream of all the girls in my village: I’d like new saris and jewels and I’d like to be married before the year ends; Arun from the next village always looks at me in our town fairs and Oh, would that he’d marry me and we’d have a home and a farm and cows and we’d have children and we’d live our quiet lives in our secluded village… Sir, that is my dream…I have nothing more to say, Sir… I hope you are done… Or maybe you should talk, Sir…
Poem based on painting: The Milkmaid (1904) by Ravi Varma
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Aug 7, 2011
Aug 7, 2011 at 8:55 PM UTC
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