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/// to what degree loveless *** makes The boudoir seem to be a ********** room Reveals the essence of the Man // ( but of course --- some men --- and women !  -- Prefer the sterility of " mere function " And the sense of safety thus provided ) •• •• Will we become robots before robots become man ! •• •• We die real easy unless we don't ////// • The prison walls are mere illusion You can only hide for a little while ////// I read the poem from a mother trying to save her children () Real feelings !!! ( coming from oh so very far away ) The boudoir walls are thick with lust Nothing can penetrate Till all walls just fade away // Our comments GREAT READ , MOM ! KEEP FIGHTING ! sound as hollow as our hearts ||||| in the ********** the untouched bodies weep Hey YOU ! GET YOUR *** OVER HERE ! fills the empty spaces where no one is ////// The homeless children stagger on The childless mother moans // The world around us changing shapes
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May 16, 2015
May 16, 2015 at 2:41 PM UTC
into da boudoir wit you --- baby
/// to what degree loveless *** makes The boudoir seem to be a ********** room Reveals the essence of the Man // ( but of course --- some men --- and women !  -- Prefer the sterility of " mere function " And the sense of safety thus provided ) •• •• Will we become robots before robots become man ! •• •• We die real easy unless we don't ////// • The prison walls are mere illusion You can only hide for a little while ////// I read the poem from a mother trying to save her children () Real feelings !!! ( coming from oh so very far away ) The boudoir walls are thick with lust Nothing can penetrate Till all walls just fade away // Our comments GREAT READ , MOM ! KEEP FIGHTING ! sound as hollow as our hearts ||||| in the ********** the untouched bodies weep Hey YOU ! GET YOUR *** OVER HERE ! fills the empty spaces where no one is ////// The homeless children stagger on The childless mother moans // The world around us changing shapes
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May 16, 2015
May 16, 2015 at 2:41 PM UTC
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