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as is our wont, she cooks, I clean. a division of labor, that reflects skills levels celebrating les différences vivent! sink-bent, over the grill pans, with water thundering, soap liquid armies/battles concocting (secret, shh!) nonetheless overhears her chilling in bed, veg TV watching thunderous interrupted by what he knows will be minimum six or seven sneezes which is her wont. one/two won't ever do, she a veritable sneezing machine gun, ever alert, the scrubbing man becomes a danseur fluid, performing a triple tours en l'aire from kitchen to bed in three bounds with swift and mighty leaps to new heights, he makes his way to her side, having plucked tissues, from a nearby, overhanging branch upon his way. seven sneezes immobilize, kinda like being tasered, snowball-in-the-face stunners, requires her man to be a her-o-dancer to be a savior, gift bearing of relief-aid to her side. he returns to the kitchen work, you cannot half wash dishes, it's an all or none thing, it's a man self back slap/clap of the hands when satisfaction of job completed visible. satisfaction of just rewards should always be given to heroes, danseurs, dishwashers, one and all so when he slips in beside her, greeted with seven kisses for seven sneezes *and this children is no love poem, but one of daily stories of lives well lived in love, where the mundane, where the ordinary, traded up into precious extraordinary are ever on poems of life, and ok, yup, love too.* now slap/clap for jobs well done....
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May 16, 2015
May 16, 2015 at 11:10 AM UTC
Seven Sneezes, Seven Kisses
as is our wont, she cooks, I clean. a division of labor, that reflects skills levels celebrating les différences vivent! sink-bent, over the grill pans, with water thundering, soap liquid armies/battles concocting (secret, shh!) nonetheless overhears her chilling in bed, veg TV watching thunderous interrupted by what he knows will be minimum six or seven sneezes which is her wont. one/two won't ever do, she a veritable sneezing machine gun, ever alert, the scrubbing man becomes a danseur fluid, performing a triple tours en l'aire from kitchen to bed in three bounds with swift and mighty leaps to new heights, he makes his way to her side, having plucked tissues, from a nearby, overhanging branch upon his way. seven sneezes immobilize, kinda like being tasered, snowball-in-the-face stunners, requires her man to be a her-o-dancer to be a savior, gift bearing of relief-aid to her side. he returns to the kitchen work, you cannot half wash dishes, it's an all or none thing, it's a man self back slap/clap of the hands when satisfaction of job completed visible. satisfaction of just rewards should always be given to heroes, danseurs, dishwashers, one and all so when he slips in beside her, greeted with seven kisses for seven sneezes *and this children is no love poem, but one of daily stories of lives well lived in love, where the mundane, where the ordinary, traded up into precious extraordinary are ever on poems of life, and ok, yup, love too.* now slap/clap for jobs well done....
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May 16, 2015
May 16, 2015 at 11:10 AM UTC
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