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Saw thousands of hues Advertised words and colors abused By the faceless who sell us happiness In overpriced shoes, orchestrated cues Service with a smile imbued But all in fact bruises, silk nooses On susceptible brains, adolescent misuses Of maturity delayed, adulthood paused all a massive stifling ruse, thus lighting my fuse
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May 15, 2015
May 15, 2015 at 6:39 PM UTC
Commercial Ruse
Saw thousands of hues Advertised words and colors abused By the faceless who sell us happiness In overpriced shoes, orchestrated cues Service with a smile imbued But all in fact bruises, silk nooses On susceptible brains, adolescent misuses Of maturity delayed, adulthood paused all a massive stifling ruse, thus lighting my fuse
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May 15, 2015
May 15, 2015 at 6:39 PM UTC
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