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two hundred years ago    or so this title might have read "America", etc., according to the myth that then was strong and still exotic    and promising to aliens with no experience today, after Wounded Knee, the Trail of Tears, the Civil War, the Restoration, all the lynchings, after Vietnam, Grenada, Panama, Nicaragua, the Gulf, Iraq, Afghanistan,Lybia, Syria & cetera, Ferguson, Baltimore, & cetera, "America" has disappeared it has, in fact, become quite evident that to subsume the continent    on the far side        of the Atlantic or Pacific    with this name will do no more    in truth, it rarely ever did the mythic notion    of a just and free society was definitely buried at My Lai, Panama City, on the desert plains of Kurdistan, the Baghdad prisons,     and Guantanamo by racist violence & arrogance    and pitiful ideas of white supremacy    the usa today lies bare    of the old promise of 'America' street people, rampant fundamentalists, drugs, and low employment rates, in a society that longs    despite its cherished myth    of tough but honest competition for holy war in order to rebuild with profit    what it has destroyed with arms that, to all evidence, cares not a penny's worth for    the unbuildable    which never shows in the domestic census or for the lives of others but their own brave boys    preferably white who have in recent years       though with increasing discomfort upon appointment by their country's presidents achieved the dreary fame    of bombing back into the stone age distant lands that had     just barely begun to make it out from there            * * *
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May 14, 2015
May 14, 2015 at 3:13 PM UTC
usa today (critical)
two hundred years ago    or so this title might have read "America", etc., according to the myth that then was strong and still exotic    and promising to aliens with no experience today, after Wounded Knee, the Trail of Tears, the Civil War, the Restoration, all the lynchings, after Vietnam, Grenada, Panama, Nicaragua, the Gulf, Iraq, Afghanistan,Lybia, Syria & cetera, Ferguson, Baltimore, & cetera, "America" has disappeared it has, in fact, become quite evident that to subsume the continent    on the far side        of the Atlantic or Pacific    with this name will do no more    in truth, it rarely ever did the mythic notion    of a just and free society was definitely buried at My Lai, Panama City, on the desert plains of Kurdistan, the Baghdad prisons,     and Guantanamo by racist violence & arrogance    and pitiful ideas of white supremacy    the usa today lies bare    of the old promise of 'America' street people, rampant fundamentalists, drugs, and low employment rates, in a society that longs    despite its cherished myth    of tough but honest competition for holy war in order to rebuild with profit    what it has destroyed with arms that, to all evidence, cares not a penny's worth for    the unbuildable    which never shows in the domestic census or for the lives of others but their own brave boys    preferably white who have in recent years       though with increasing discomfort upon appointment by their country's presidents achieved the dreary fame    of bombing back into the stone age distant lands that had     just barely begun to make it out from there            * * *
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May 14, 2015
May 14, 2015 at 3:13 PM UTC
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