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i'm lost somewhere familar looking at ashy knees in bath suds with disdain rose petals sprinkled away have the loftiest abode have the airiest dresses, but i never had auburn tresses like hers i was charcoal in comparison one of the desert girls; candles flickered the way she'd bat her eyelashes bringing hands to my eyes i lie on the floor and i lie to them more a nightgown hangs the way the pale moon did carpet kissing my bare feet rosy knuckles grasping a storm the lake foams over in it's wake who saves you now
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May 10, 2015
May 10, 2015 at 7:03 PM UTC
End Of The Line
i'm lost somewhere familar looking at ashy knees in bath suds with disdain rose petals sprinkled away have the loftiest abode have the airiest dresses, but i never had auburn tresses like hers i was charcoal in comparison one of the desert girls; candles flickered the way she'd bat her eyelashes bringing hands to my eyes i lie on the floor and i lie to them more a nightgown hangs the way the pale moon did carpet kissing my bare feet rosy knuckles grasping a storm the lake foams over in it's wake who saves you now
Based off the song and video for End Of The Line by Sleigh Bells. I tried to match the visuals and give it a story.
olena
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May 10, 2015
May 10, 2015 at 7:03 PM UTC
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