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Yachts like musical notes Line the horizon in chorus Whistling through the boats As sails dance around the masts The breeze plays flute Against the trunks of palms They sway to the tune Each in perfect time The sand ups and whirls Then twists and turns Like dancing hula girls Twirling garlands above their heads Birds rise and fall With the song of the waves while freedom she calls And sings to us all copyright/all rights reserved Joe Fogg 2011
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Jul 27, 2011
Jul 27, 2011 at 1:18 AM UTC
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Yachts like musical notes Line the horizon in chorus Whistling through the boats As sails dance around the masts The breeze plays flute Against the trunks of palms They sway to the tune Each in perfect time The sand ups and whirls Then twists and turns Like dancing hula girls Twirling garlands above their heads Birds rise and fall With the song of the waves while freedom she calls And sings to us all copyright/all rights reserved Joe Fogg 2011
I need help with the ending - suggestions please?
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Jul 27, 2011
Jul 27, 2011 at 1:18 AM UTC
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