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there you go, sweeping over the unknown and envisioning yourself in the promised land. you have not chosen this, you did not build these walls, or maybe you did. as the lead spirals you count your blessings you pray it's over soon and you don't even believe in God. maybe your journey doesn't end at the pier. they found a boy dead off the coast, so close, right off that pier. his family stopped looking. but you have something, a delusion and a lengthy curse, a vision you should not possess and it's dying with your growing rationality. don't you wish you were like everybody else? you don't hear the waves anymore. you're a mile from the shore but it's too loud now. it feels like a desert, and you're dying of thirst.
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Apr 29, 2015
Apr 29, 2015 at 9:25 PM UTC
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there you go, sweeping over the unknown and envisioning yourself in the promised land. you have not chosen this, you did not build these walls, or maybe you did. as the lead spirals you count your blessings you pray it's over soon and you don't even believe in God. maybe your journey doesn't end at the pier. they found a boy dead off the coast, so close, right off that pier. his family stopped looking. but you have something, a delusion and a lengthy curse, a vision you should not possess and it's dying with your growing rationality. don't you wish you were like everybody else? you don't hear the waves anymore. you're a mile from the shore but it's too loud now. it feels like a desert, and you're dying of thirst.
you as in me
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Apr 29, 2015
Apr 29, 2015 at 9:25 PM UTC
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