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But...Tantric mumbo-jumbo Joe Issued from a dribbled lip. Issued from a tortured mind Which writhes in phraseology to slip. ....slip between the now and then Slip between the right and wrong, confused about reaction to Our capacity to sing your song. ....that eerie tune of deep lament Lament for what should be, but won't, For we is but a subterfuge... Who says it did but knows it don't. M.
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Apr 29, 2015
Apr 29, 2015 at 3:49 PM UTC
Reaction to Joe Malgeri's brilliant "Immortal Days"
But...Tantric mumbo-jumbo Joe Issued from a dribbled lip. Issued from a tortured mind Which writhes in phraseology to slip. ....slip between the now and then Slip between the right and wrong, confused about reaction to Our capacity to sing your song. ....that eerie tune of deep lament Lament for what should be, but won't, For we is but a subterfuge... Who says it did but knows it don't. M.
Cool it Joe...this ain't an attack....more of a gravelly challenge for you to expand on the theme in the face of a socially hostile audience. Cheers mate M.
marshal-gebbie
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Apr 29, 2015
Apr 29, 2015 at 3:49 PM UTC
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