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I will always remember him & that it could have been me stepping on that horrible explosion on that fateful scorching day. Carter* went up suddenly in a pinkish-mist, all the camels nearby scrambled, as he slumped in excruciating agony. It wasn't pretty, seeing him lying like that, exposed, in a pool of blood with no ******* boots untied. They hauled him out screaming he wanted to die, blood-curdling, hollering ****** Jesus (and for his Mother) in a beefed-up Humvee. It wasn't funny. I wanted to walk point that morning, but he insisted on struttin' his big ***** which tragically he lost forever in Babylon. That sizzling hot ******* Babylon.
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Apr 29, 2015
Apr 29, 2015 at 9:00 AM UTC
He Lost His ***** In Babylon
I will always remember him & that it could have been me stepping on that horrible explosion on that fateful scorching day. Carter* went up suddenly in a pinkish-mist, all the camels nearby scrambled, as he slumped in excruciating agony. It wasn't pretty, seeing him lying like that, exposed, in a pool of blood with no ******* boots untied. They hauled him out screaming he wanted to die, blood-curdling, hollering ****** Jesus (and for his Mother) in a beefed-up Humvee. It wasn't funny. I wanted to walk point that morning, but he insisted on struttin' his big ***** which tragically he lost forever in Babylon. That sizzling hot ******* Babylon.
*Not his real name.
jonny-angel
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Apr 29, 2015
Apr 29, 2015 at 9:00 AM UTC
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