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This numbness and this pain It eats me away She said it was just a platonic game My heart aches and bleeds Just like my whole world Can’t you see that I’m freaking hurt No matter what I say or do You won’t love me like I love you
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Apr 28, 2015
Apr 28, 2015 at 5:57 PM UTC
Platonic Love
This numbness and this pain It eats me away She said it was just a platonic game My heart aches and bleeds Just like my whole world Can’t you see that I’m freaking hurt No matter what I say or do You won’t love me like I love you
I just want to say I dont know anything about Poetry unfortunately. So every time I write, I hope that it comes out alright. So i really appreciate it if you review it so I can work on my skills. Thank you for reading :)
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Apr 28, 2015
Apr 28, 2015 at 5:57 PM UTC
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