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I The more water I drink, the less acidic I find myself to be                                                            over time. The grinding away at the back of my throat slowly abates my voice grates otherwise, worn and weary, bleary-eyed. II The more air I breathe, the less oxygen there is for those                                                            around me, unless the cycle ousts the poisons flowing from my mouth, my neighbours suffer for my presence with baited breath. III The more time spent thinking,            the deeper I am sinking,                     until the two things I need most overwhelm and undermine me d r  o   w    n     i      n       g        .         .          . IV The concentration of a consciousness smears across the gradient toward absolute dilution
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Apr 26, 2015
Apr 26, 2015 at 9:01 AM UTC
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I The more water I drink, the less acidic I find myself to be                                                            over time. The grinding away at the back of my throat slowly abates my voice grates otherwise, worn and weary, bleary-eyed. II The more air I breathe, the less oxygen there is for those                                                            around me, unless the cycle ousts the poisons flowing from my mouth, my neighbours suffer for my presence with baited breath. III The more time spent thinking,            the deeper I am sinking,                     until the two things I need most overwhelm and undermine me d r  o   w    n     i      n       g        .         .          . IV The concentration of a consciousness smears across the gradient toward absolute dilution
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Apr 26, 2015
Apr 26, 2015 at 9:01 AM UTC
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