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it's all I have, not much, to you, but all and with my heart torn asunder I watch my life, my labour, resting here, for you to plunder... ravage the fields, torch the meadows **** the bees and watch the clover wither... count not the cost of your rapacious greed, see only your hearts selfish need to be the sum the total, the all. not knowing, in your victory you become...the pall, that settles in the room and stops the conversation, like smog and a locust infestation. this is my life, my family and we do, what we do to remain free of heartache and negativity. we need not your benediction, or blessing of our grace. so...you look to yours and shut your face.... ********************************** napowrimo2015 prompt : write a parody or satirical poem...utalizing a famous poem you know *"It's all I have to bring today – This, and my heart beside – This, and my heart, and all the fields – And all the meadows wide – Be sure you count – should I forget Some one the sum could tell – This, and my heart, and all the Bees Which in the Clover dwell"* Emily Dickenson.
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Apr 25, 2015
Apr 25, 2015 at 5:48 PM UTC
a visit from the king
it's all I have, not much, to you, but all and with my heart torn asunder I watch my life, my labour, resting here, for you to plunder... ravage the fields, torch the meadows **** the bees and watch the clover wither... count not the cost of your rapacious greed, see only your hearts selfish need to be the sum the total, the all. not knowing, in your victory you become...the pall, that settles in the room and stops the conversation, like smog and a locust infestation. this is my life, my family and we do, what we do to remain free of heartache and negativity. we need not your benediction, or blessing of our grace. so...you look to yours and shut your face.... ********************************** napowrimo2015 prompt : write a parody or satirical poem...utalizing a famous poem you know *"It's all I have to bring today – This, and my heart beside – This, and my heart, and all the fields – And all the meadows wide – Be sure you count – should I forget Some one the sum could tell – This, and my heart, and all the Bees Which in the Clover dwell"* Emily Dickenson.
started out as something different, but ended up as apoem about my frustration with my brother's need to compete and put me down... when he visits.... he needs to be at all times the king of the castle... middle child syndrome..... (and yes it would be easier not to invite him....but my mother dotes on him.... family dynamics **** sometimes.) so there it is.... in all it's pettiness.
betterdays
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F/Australian
Apr 25, 2015
Apr 25, 2015 at 5:48 PM UTC
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