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Broken hearts           Broken home                       Broken bonds My mind           My heart                   My love No longer can we sustain As foundation crumbles beneath our feet This ship we built has fallen to sunken sails. As water rises Waves strike bow It fills our boat and weighs us down All I've taste for weeks is salt From my eyes,          My brow                 My cheeks I bite my tong in fear I beg you to change course Yet you alone Captain this ship  Blind to ensuing storm. My heart is to heavy to swim my love So I must bid retreat. The thought of loosing you to Davey Jones Set action upon me. You cry mutiny I just cry It is not a lack of love Just changing of the tides How could we have foreseen this voyage to meet its end. We were green and rash Dreaming of an endless journey off into the sunset...
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Apr 22, 2015
Apr 22, 2015 at 9:02 PM UTC
Mutiny My Love
Broken hearts           Broken home                       Broken bonds My mind           My heart                   My love No longer can we sustain As foundation crumbles beneath our feet This ship we built has fallen to sunken sails. As water rises Waves strike bow It fills our boat and weighs us down All I've taste for weeks is salt From my eyes,          My brow                 My cheeks I bite my tong in fear I beg you to change course Yet you alone Captain this ship  Blind to ensuing storm. My heart is to heavy to swim my love So I must bid retreat. The thought of loosing you to Davey Jones Set action upon me. You cry mutiny I just cry It is not a lack of love Just changing of the tides How could we have foreseen this voyage to meet its end. We were green and rash Dreaming of an endless journey off into the sunset...
I'm going to seriously come back to this one and revise. I thought it was perfect but one tiny change led to another and now its far from.
ryan-clark
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Apr 22, 2015
Apr 22, 2015 at 9:02 PM UTC
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