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This is a wordy piece of prose Jumping in and out of rhythms. I hate to be negative of any expression But this is of no use to anyone. I am not advocating return to form But it might help If you know how it works. The simple vocabulary Does not stretch the reader And the Mystery of Darkness, Is philosophical rambling Defunct of elegance. A consciousness exists Beyond our understanding, Seek this, close your eyes And enter the darkness… Poetry is more than just Writing down your thoughts. Some material needs formality Of poetic armoury. And your images? Where are they? There are all the trappings Of abstract thought – But I can’t see no ****** horse.
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Apr 13, 2015
Apr 13, 2015 at 7:49 PM UTC
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This is a wordy piece of prose Jumping in and out of rhythms. I hate to be negative of any expression But this is of no use to anyone. I am not advocating return to form But it might help If you know how it works. The simple vocabulary Does not stretch the reader And the Mystery of Darkness, Is philosophical rambling Defunct of elegance. A consciousness exists Beyond our understanding, Seek this, close your eyes And enter the darkness… Poetry is more than just Writing down your thoughts. Some material needs formality Of poetic armoury. And your images? Where are they? There are all the trappings Of abstract thought – But I can’t see no ****** horse.
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Skendong
Apr 13, 2015
Apr 13, 2015 at 7:49 PM UTC
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