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**Epitome of Victorian man demanding to be the patriarch, the man of the house, the father figure law, bread and butter, wearing the pants. ( With his chair by the fire and smoking a pipe, tweed slippers he wears, masters dog at his feet. ) Stubborn, mule headed, unyielding as ice he glares at the young, but less deserving than they growls at them all, when all that they do is play ... having so much fun. But summoning always the housemaid he needs ( in her place, she's his surrogate mum, ) and when income 'flows' in, miracles work their home all alone she keeps. He, early to rise, and early to work, then early back home again five whole days of graft works he, only two of solid rest, but by the end of the month, a 'basic' brings home she'd wish it would last a four week. And under the thumb, thinks he holds her putting down always, when friends call around, taking his share of the kitty she holds but always wants more of whatever she gives. He never is wrong, the obvious stating whats been mentioned before, now his to tell her, and she takes it all with calm and grace I still can't believe that it's really her. So, far stronger than steel that hold down her feet she now wears the shackles she forged, and the scars I see bared from imprisonment were carved when she donned, the shroud that see wove. And the tears from my heart, to see her so used she's still trapped in once gilded, now rusty cage, so better by far, freedom from ******* far worse, life squandered in thrall.** ...   ...   ...
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Jul 9, 2011
Jul 9, 2011 at 3:50 AM UTC
... Dickensian Days ...
**Epitome of Victorian man demanding to be the patriarch, the man of the house, the father figure law, bread and butter, wearing the pants. ( With his chair by the fire and smoking a pipe, tweed slippers he wears, masters dog at his feet. ) Stubborn, mule headed, unyielding as ice he glares at the young, but less deserving than they growls at them all, when all that they do is play ... having so much fun. But summoning always the housemaid he needs ( in her place, she's his surrogate mum, ) and when income 'flows' in, miracles work their home all alone she keeps. He, early to rise, and early to work, then early back home again five whole days of graft works he, only two of solid rest, but by the end of the month, a 'basic' brings home she'd wish it would last a four week. And under the thumb, thinks he holds her putting down always, when friends call around, taking his share of the kitty she holds but always wants more of whatever she gives. He never is wrong, the obvious stating whats been mentioned before, now his to tell her, and she takes it all with calm and grace I still can't believe that it's really her. So, far stronger than steel that hold down her feet she now wears the shackles she forged, and the scars I see bared from imprisonment were carved when she donned, the shroud that see wove. And the tears from my heart, to see her so used she's still trapped in once gilded, now rusty cage, so better by far, freedom from ******* far worse, life squandered in thrall.** ...   ...   ...
howard-brace
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Jul 9, 2011
Jul 9, 2011 at 3:50 AM UTC
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