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so faint, this feeling, concealing the self the key, the gate. this phantom of fate. awake? maybe... not "if seen more before." how could life keel over so. chore like choir, shifting shore, at core. endure. in door. ..snore. hot magma. still? para-lapse. "who's here" -yelling like this bathroom floor can  feel. -hear, hear- nothing . the embrace....then death. again till breath, bleach white birth. touching earth. Suspense....
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Jul 8, 2011
Jul 8, 2011 at 10:17 PM UTC
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so faint, this feeling, concealing the self the key, the gate. this phantom of fate. awake? maybe... not "if seen more before." how could life keel over so. chore like choir, shifting shore, at core. endure. in door. ..snore. hot magma. still? para-lapse. "who's here" -yelling like this bathroom floor can  feel. -hear, hear- nothing . the embrace....then death. again till breath, bleach white birth. touching earth. Suspense....
justin-ansardi
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Jul 8, 2011
Jul 8, 2011 at 10:17 PM UTC
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