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Unbeknown to her, she was the other daughter. The clairvoyant said she was born of water. *“Your beauty is your saving grace, for so admired is your cherub-face.” “My dear child, hold my hand close to you, & see here, a young girl; veiled in black. Worshipping the moon, beside a wolf pack.” “For you, are celebrating a Lunar New Year, requesting the spirits, my dear beholding the Universe in the palm of your hands. In the shadows, a silhouette is walking towards you; a woman of a quintet.” "You hear the piercing tone of a shawm, a choir of voices & women barefooted whose anklets ****** as a ritual dance begins. But you stay. A statuette in stance."* © Sia Jane
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Apr 6, 2015
Apr 6, 2015 at 12:33 PM UTC
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Unbeknown to her, she was the other daughter. The clairvoyant said she was born of water. *“Your beauty is your saving grace, for so admired is your cherub-face.” “My dear child, hold my hand close to you, & see here, a young girl; veiled in black. Worshipping the moon, beside a wolf pack.” “For you, are celebrating a Lunar New Year, requesting the spirits, my dear beholding the Universe in the palm of your hands. In the shadows, a silhouette is walking towards you; a woman of a quintet.” "You hear the piercing tone of a shawm, a choir of voices & women barefooted whose anklets ****** as a ritual dance begins. But you stay. A statuette in stance."* © Sia Jane
Written in the form of David Lehman, "The Matador of Metaphor" - 16 lines and the same rhyme scheme.
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Apr 6, 2015
Apr 6, 2015 at 12:33 PM UTC
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