Winter listens, listens.
Meanings, breathe imperial
Tis difference.
When like –
When the it –
When it listens.....
Tis it, the difference
Winter like scar, comes,
He the Landscape
– An –
We, the breath,
-NO-
When Hurt,
goes, –
We imperial none
We hold - are seal,
are afflicted lights
-The Distance -
...of the us...
– None listens –
Where it holds hurt,
it comes as,
Cathedraled Despair
Any listens – '
Tis –
the goes, '
tis of the us - goes,
Distance On light,
But comes, gives us –
Death -
of certain slanted despair,
None listens - goes,
We find the Distance Of it –
That a Hurt,
Any meaning –
Heavenly Meanings,
Teach us Hurt,
The like of-
tuned,
affliction,
shadows,
imperial despair.
look-teach-look-find-listen-look,
Send imperial light,
Shadows of light
Any Heft- Any Slant -
Of their affliction,
scar-differential.
Sent like winter
– An –
heaven
None on hold,
goes,
There is it – There is it -
Shaft of hefted light
Sent slanted - sealed compassion
falls from internal, elanic height.
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Apr 5, 2015
Apr 5, 2015 at 9:55 AM UTC
Winter listens, listens.
Meanings, breathe imperial
Tis difference.
When like –
When the it –
When it listens.....
Tis it, the difference
Winter like scar, comes,
He the Landscape
– An –
We, the breath,
-NO-
When Hurt,
goes, –
We imperial none
We hold - are seal,
are afflicted lights
-The Distance -
...of the us...
– None listens –
Where it holds hurt,
it comes as,
Cathedraled Despair
Any listens – '
Tis –
the goes, '
tis of the us - goes,
Distance On light,
But comes, gives us –
Death -
of certain slanted despair,
None listens - goes,
We find the Distance Of it –
That a Hurt,
Any meaning –
Heavenly Meanings,
Teach us Hurt,
The like of-
tuned,
affliction,
shadows,
imperial despair.
look-teach-look-find-listen-look,
Send imperial light,
Shadows of light
Any Heft- Any Slant -
Of their affliction,
scar-differential.
Sent like winter
– An –
heaven
None on hold,
goes,
There is it – There is it -
Shaft of hefted light
Sent slanted - sealed compassion
falls from internal, elanic height.
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napowrimo2015
prompt:
using an Emily Dickenson
Poem..
rewrite
into a new piece.
Original poem:
There's a certain Slant of light,
BY EMILY DICKINSON
There's a certain Slant of light,
Winter Afternoons –
That oppresses, like the Heft
Of Cathedral Tunes –
Heavenly Hurt, it gives us –
We can find no scar,
But internal difference –
Where the Meanings, are –
None may teach it – Any –
'Tis the seal Despair –
An imperial affliction
Sent us of the Air –
When it comes, the Landscape listens –
Shadows – hold their breath –
When it goes, 'tis like the Distance
On the look of Death
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