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so naive dreamt in narrow corridors of better things so naive the war is not outdoors it’s your mind where heaven starts and hell begins unravel guises you swear you knew foe not friend and at the bottom of a hell that i had made comprised of external situations and the promises of better days the bridges built soon fell away the ashes swim in puddles deep of expectations so naive and what was left there well that was me so naive
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Apr 3, 2015
Apr 3, 2015 at 11:02 PM UTC
slow swimmer
so naive dreamt in narrow corridors of better things so naive the war is not outdoors it’s your mind where heaven starts and hell begins unravel guises you swear you knew foe not friend and at the bottom of a hell that i had made comprised of external situations and the promises of better days the bridges built soon fell away the ashes swim in puddles deep of expectations so naive and what was left there well that was me so naive
Zphyranthe
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Apr 3, 2015
Apr 3, 2015 at 11:02 PM UTC
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