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The still quiet of the empty apartment serves to only echo the steady tapping of rainwater dripping onto the concrete just outside the window Everything feels like it should be painted by Picasso, during his blue period in various shades of the clam, but icy color The fact that it isn't gives the soul a sense of nervous displacement. All of these commonplace colors and shapes feel foreign and surreal The world seems like it should be frozen in both the sense of stillness and temperature but it’s not A warm breeze is moving the bland, beige curtains and that is more terrifying than any monster that has never hidden under your bed The rainwater still drips, and echoes and nothing is wrong, out of place, or eerie except that it should be and so it is
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Apr 3, 2015
Apr 3, 2015 at 3:42 PM UTC
Incongruent (3/30)
The still quiet of the empty apartment serves to only echo the steady tapping of rainwater dripping onto the concrete just outside the window Everything feels like it should be painted by Picasso, during his blue period in various shades of the clam, but icy color The fact that it isn't gives the soul a sense of nervous displacement. All of these commonplace colors and shapes feel foreign and surreal The world seems like it should be frozen in both the sense of stillness and temperature but it’s not A warm breeze is moving the bland, beige curtains and that is more terrifying than any monster that has never hidden under your bed The rainwater still drips, and echoes and nothing is wrong, out of place, or eerie except that it should be and so it is
napowrimo 2015
jm-romig-1
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34/M/American
Apr 3, 2015
Apr 3, 2015 at 3:42 PM UTC
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