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Each rooms a little dimmer now, each sky a bit more grey. The sun shines not as brightly, there's less laughter in each day. The hours seem somehow longer with each minute comes the pain If I could have just one more day with you to see your face again… Into this world you brought me taught me right from wrong Your laughter was my music your love, that musics song I assumed you'd always be there to share my joy and ease my pain its hard to know I'll never see you or hear your voice again The sunshine of my every day has now been replaced by cloud but I know that you're still up there Mum I'll do my best to do you proud
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Jul 2, 2011
Jul 2, 2011 at 7:11 AM UTC
My greatest loss
Each rooms a little dimmer now, each sky a bit more grey. The sun shines not as brightly, there's less laughter in each day. The hours seem somehow longer with each minute comes the pain If I could have just one more day with you to see your face again… Into this world you brought me taught me right from wrong Your laughter was my music your love, that musics song I assumed you'd always be there to share my joy and ease my pain its hard to know I'll never see you or hear your voice again The sunshine of my every day has now been replaced by cloud but I know that you're still up there Mum I'll do my best to do you proud
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Jul 2, 2011
Jul 2, 2011 at 7:11 AM UTC
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