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charred exoskeleton with a spider-like crown    empty network of wires    skinny black straws a burnt-out wreck of salt-flecked bones    mottled gaps unfilled    now an eerie static abacus a blemish in the sea crumbling like stale cake
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Apr 2, 2015
Apr 2, 2015 at 2:51 PM UTC
West Pier
charred exoskeleton with a spider-like crown    empty network of wires    skinny black straws a burnt-out wreck of salt-flecked bones    mottled gaps unfilled    now an eerie static abacus a blemish in the sea crumbling like stale cake
Written: April 2015. Explanation: A poem written in my own time inspired by an image in the May 2015 issue of The Sunday Times Travel Magazine of West Pier in Brighton, taken by Finn Hopson. The pier closed in 1975 and fell into disrepair, particularly after a large fire in 2003.
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Apr 2, 2015
Apr 2, 2015 at 2:51 PM UTC
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