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I was at some party that is and was just like all the other totally forgettable parties     And there she was the most unforgettable thing I have ever come across      I mean she was so confusingly beautiful and it made me want to know what would happen if I got closer       But I didn't know how to move my feet and I found myself at a loss for words to even begin to explain her beauty      So I stood there and watched from a distance but watching her just made me infatuated with what I knew I could not have
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Mar 28, 2015
Mar 28, 2015 at 3:04 PM UTC
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I was at some party that is and was just like all the other totally forgettable parties     And there she was the most unforgettable thing I have ever come across      I mean she was so confusingly beautiful and it made me want to know what would happen if I got closer       But I didn't know how to move my feet and I found myself at a loss for words to even begin to explain her beauty      So I stood there and watched from a distance but watching her just made me infatuated with what I knew I could not have
I felt like writing from a guys point of few and I liked how it turned out
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Mar 28, 2015
Mar 28, 2015 at 3:04 PM UTC
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