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Rain-ing out-side, think-ing of you. It could be the drum beat you play. (fast, cha-o-tic) My jump-started heart when I see you. (long-ing, crav-ing) Or the sound of Flesh, skin on skin. (ea-ger, play-ful) But, I think its Be-cause its set to the same time, (Four. Beats. Per. Bar.) As when I struck my closed fist to my ach-ing chest, ster-num crack-ing *(four-loud-thumps-to -my-rib-cage)* Try-ing to stop cry-ing, gasp-ing. *(four-with-each-damn -ed-rattl-ing-breath)* When you hurt me. It-did-not-help.
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Jun 25, 2011
Jun 25, 2011 at 6:21 PM UTC
Four-Four Time
Rain-ing out-side, think-ing of you. It could be the drum beat you play. (fast, cha-o-tic) My jump-started heart when I see you. (long-ing, crav-ing) Or the sound of Flesh, skin on skin. (ea-ger, play-ful) But, I think its Be-cause its set to the same time, (Four. Beats. Per. Bar.) As when I struck my closed fist to my ach-ing chest, ster-num crack-ing *(four-loud-thumps-to -my-rib-cage)* Try-ing to stop cry-ing, gasp-ing. *(four-with-each-damn -ed-rattl-ing-breath)* When you hurt me. It-did-not-help.
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Jun 25, 2011
Jun 25, 2011 at 6:21 PM UTC
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