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Mirror Mirror on the wall Who the prettiest of them all Her head held high; her shoulders tall Mirror Mirror on the wall She said she would never fall Mirror Mirror on the wall She saw the boy while at the mall He broke her heart; he made her bawl Mirror Mirror on the wall How could she feel so small? Mirror Mirror on the wall Watch her break and watch her fall Her body shakes; she tries to crawl Mirror Mirror on the wall Here’s the girl who lost it all
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Jun 20, 2011
Jun 20, 2011 at 10:15 PM UTC
Mirror Mirror
Mirror Mirror on the wall Who the prettiest of them all Her head held high; her shoulders tall Mirror Mirror on the wall She said she would never fall Mirror Mirror on the wall She saw the boy while at the mall He broke her heart; he made her bawl Mirror Mirror on the wall How could she feel so small? Mirror Mirror on the wall Watch her break and watch her fall Her body shakes; she tries to crawl Mirror Mirror on the wall Here’s the girl who lost it all
Okay. So I haven't been writing very long, but I would like some feedback. Thank You to everyone who takes the time to give me some advice!
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Jun 20, 2011
Jun 20, 2011 at 10:15 PM UTC
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