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His body sinks to the depths of fading thoughts, returning, shifting sand-dune visions. She bathes in the trickle of letters escaping burnt lips like when she ***** in the moonlight adrift his month-long lunar withdrawal -or when she lets the breeze hit her to erase the thunder. She traces his words with her heart following lines on a crumbling map -callused fingertip rubbing against yellow paper as once he would trace a corpse’s veins. Aubergine voice then seeps through pores into her vacuous chest -prying open bleeding heart heart which hides in a corner of her quiet brain brain that heals him from memories of immortalized hollow of her necks against ghostly wrists memories burning worse than fire. Together they lie in the dark amidst deserts of emotions, pools of memories, rivers of unshed tears, -daylight drowsily approaching to chase away lingering dreams.
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Mar 17, 2015
Mar 17, 2015 at 8:07 AM UTC
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His body sinks to the depths of fading thoughts, returning, shifting sand-dune visions. She bathes in the trickle of letters escaping burnt lips like when she ***** in the moonlight adrift his month-long lunar withdrawal -or when she lets the breeze hit her to erase the thunder. She traces his words with her heart following lines on a crumbling map -callused fingertip rubbing against yellow paper as once he would trace a corpse’s veins. Aubergine voice then seeps through pores into her vacuous chest -prying open bleeding heart heart which hides in a corner of her quiet brain brain that heals him from memories of immortalized hollow of her necks against ghostly wrists memories burning worse than fire. Together they lie in the dark amidst deserts of emotions, pools of memories, rivers of unshed tears, -daylight drowsily approaching to chase away lingering dreams.
I wrote this for my Literature class as part of an analysis of The English Patient, a novel by Michael Ondaatje. The purpose was to mimic the dream-like atmosphere established by the relationship of two of the main characters, both suffering from PTSD symptoms. Haven't got a title and I'm open to ideas! Enjoy x
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Mar 17, 2015
Mar 17, 2015 at 8:07 AM UTC
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