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If someone were standing on top of a mountain of sand (maybe on a camel, maybe with a cough) along the Dead Sea at four this morning they might have heard two voices one accented thickly enough to leave an aftertaste, one small forced into lower registers for old reasons echoed in new habits bouncing along the water like insects, like light “Talk to me in Hebrew” “Want to see me walk on water?” ”I have the same handwriting as my mother” ”Let’s start a religion” “You can see it in the R’s” ”I was in a war” ”My shoulders are turning brown” “Summer is coming” “Your back is smooth” ”I don’t believe in anything” “I got on a plane” “My fingers are salty”  ”There’s mud in my mouth” “Your hair is blonder than yesterday” “I don’t love you” If someone had been standing on top of a mountain of sand (maybe itchy, maybe pregnant) along the Dead Sea at four this morning they might have seen two bodies one white, one brown floating on the surface, the light coming over the ripples like a thousand slaves carrying morning on their backs one head on one chest, one palm on one shoulder “Nothing can live in this water” “I’m trying”
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Jun 12, 2011
Jun 12, 2011 at 8:45 AM UTC
12 jun 2011
If someone were standing on top of a mountain of sand (maybe on a camel, maybe with a cough) along the Dead Sea at four this morning they might have heard two voices one accented thickly enough to leave an aftertaste, one small forced into lower registers for old reasons echoed in new habits bouncing along the water like insects, like light “Talk to me in Hebrew” “Want to see me walk on water?” ”I have the same handwriting as my mother” ”Let’s start a religion” “You can see it in the R’s” ”I was in a war” ”My shoulders are turning brown” “Summer is coming” “Your back is smooth” ”I don’t believe in anything” “I got on a plane” “My fingers are salty”  ”There’s mud in my mouth” “Your hair is blonder than yesterday” “I don’t love you” If someone had been standing on top of a mountain of sand (maybe itchy, maybe pregnant) along the Dead Sea at four this morning they might have seen two bodies one white, one brown floating on the surface, the light coming over the ripples like a thousand slaves carrying morning on their backs one head on one chest, one palm on one shoulder “Nothing can live in this water” “I’m trying”
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Jun 12, 2011
Jun 12, 2011 at 8:45 AM UTC
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