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I sat down today and began to type, But nothing I said seemed to come out right. The meter was all wrong, The rhyme scheme was a mess, The words were too simple, The stanzas too plain, So I decided to erase it And start all over again. A few backspaces later, I started anew, And with each keystroke, My frustration grew. My thoughts were garbled And looked clumsy in print; My words were childish And seemed cliche. So I tried one last time To write something that made sense, But instead of eloquent rhymes and articulate thoughts I got ill-expressed musings and awkward phrasings. Instead of a work of beauty and awe, I had created a trite piece of junk. And yet, I found attraction in its ungainly expression And was fascinated by its candor. Nothing was hidden in dreamy language, Or couched in metaphors and vague allusions. I was filled with a strange satisfaction At having created such an unorthodox piece, That evoked in me the simultaneous feelings Of looking on a lovely, unappealing work.
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Jan 12, 2010
Jan 12, 2010 at 12:10 PM UTC
a lovely, unappealing work
I sat down today and began to type, But nothing I said seemed to come out right. The meter was all wrong, The rhyme scheme was a mess, The words were too simple, The stanzas too plain, So I decided to erase it And start all over again. A few backspaces later, I started anew, And with each keystroke, My frustration grew. My thoughts were garbled And looked clumsy in print; My words were childish And seemed cliche. So I tried one last time To write something that made sense, But instead of eloquent rhymes and articulate thoughts I got ill-expressed musings and awkward phrasings. Instead of a work of beauty and awe, I had created a trite piece of junk. And yet, I found attraction in its ungainly expression And was fascinated by its candor. Nothing was hidden in dreamy language, Or couched in metaphors and vague allusions. I was filled with a strange satisfaction At having created such an unorthodox piece, That evoked in me the simultaneous feelings Of looking on a lovely, unappealing work.
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Jan 12, 2010
Jan 12, 2010 at 12:10 PM UTC
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