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*You smell of teardrops And a little bit of rain But it doesn't make me less lonely Doesn't make the night less carefree Incense me with your words Trap me in your senses Oh Odessa, why must you be so lovely? Odessa, Come to me as you are Turn on my fire Linger in my desire My heart is your home Together we can be alone Our love was so splendid how swiftly it all ended I see your deep eyes But your heart is grave Our lives are no longer touching I can hear my glass dreams breaking Wish me well in your delight As I am torn by my plight Oh Odessa, won't you fix me? Odessa, Come to me as you are Turn on my fire Linger in my desire My heart is your home Together we can be alone Our love was so splendid how swiftly it all ended*
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Mar 11, 2015
Mar 11, 2015 at 9:19 AM UTC
Odessa (a song)
*You smell of teardrops And a little bit of rain But it doesn't make me less lonely Doesn't make the night less carefree Incense me with your words Trap me in your senses Oh Odessa, why must you be so lovely? Odessa, Come to me as you are Turn on my fire Linger in my desire My heart is your home Together we can be alone Our love was so splendid how swiftly it all ended I see your deep eyes But your heart is grave Our lives are no longer touching I can hear my glass dreams breaking Wish me well in your delight As I am torn by my plight Oh Odessa, won't you fix me? Odessa, Come to me as you are Turn on my fire Linger in my desire My heart is your home Together we can be alone Our love was so splendid how swiftly it all ended*
Hi guys!Hahaha this is my first attempt at making a song. It's about a girl named Odessa who somehow made a way into my mind. She might be this indie musician who makes really dope songs. Anyway, tell me what you think! :)
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Mar 11, 2015
Mar 11, 2015 at 9:19 AM UTC
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