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character styles, characters we’ve missed attempted to put on pedestals characters whose wits got them out of the worst situations or whose worst qualities got them into the best ones who have been balding and have ended up heroes who have overcome obstacles, some some who had less and and achieved more but achievement seems to be the underscore, yes of nationality? of pride? of masculinity? of assertion? hard to say do we need more stories in more forms or fewer stories and more individuality, more self-awareness, awareness, awareness, awareness, funny word thrown around a lot do people even know? most of the time they don’t, they are staring down at their shoes or some characters are looking up at the sky anyways, they don’t understand the issue, what is at stake, stop celebrating! start studying! or you are studying too much! the wrong drugs, the right drugs! too much of the right thing can make anyone go insane or the other way around, the right amount of the wrong thing can make anyone go freely about their day, and achieve, back to that word and what does it even mean? to achieve something? greater than yourself? for yourself to be a reflection of that thing? or that thing to be a reflection of self? man, we could debate about this for hours, where’s my coffee? or beer, or wine, your choosing man, what did I have for breakfast, I honestly forgot or no, it was toast and cofffee, yes I think its time for a stiff drink now and then another hour to achieve something, to write something, to widdle something, to create something that was not there before but some say GO, ** BA HA! to hell with objectivity, everything is recycled, nothing more and they wave their hands about as if it was borrowed from a magician, and their hearts flare up with some sort of richeousness, and they achieve…rightness? back to that again…achievement…what does it even mean?
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Mar 10, 2015
Mar 10, 2015 at 8:35 PM UTC
Achievement?
character styles, characters we’ve missed attempted to put on pedestals characters whose wits got them out of the worst situations or whose worst qualities got them into the best ones who have been balding and have ended up heroes who have overcome obstacles, some some who had less and and achieved more but achievement seems to be the underscore, yes of nationality? of pride? of masculinity? of assertion? hard to say do we need more stories in more forms or fewer stories and more individuality, more self-awareness, awareness, awareness, awareness, funny word thrown around a lot do people even know? most of the time they don’t, they are staring down at their shoes or some characters are looking up at the sky anyways, they don’t understand the issue, what is at stake, stop celebrating! start studying! or you are studying too much! the wrong drugs, the right drugs! too much of the right thing can make anyone go insane or the other way around, the right amount of the wrong thing can make anyone go freely about their day, and achieve, back to that word and what does it even mean? to achieve something? greater than yourself? for yourself to be a reflection of that thing? or that thing to be a reflection of self? man, we could debate about this for hours, where’s my coffee? or beer, or wine, your choosing man, what did I have for breakfast, I honestly forgot or no, it was toast and cofffee, yes I think its time for a stiff drink now and then another hour to achieve something, to write something, to widdle something, to create something that was not there before but some say GO, ** BA HA! to hell with objectivity, everything is recycled, nothing more and they wave their hands about as if it was borrowed from a magician, and their hearts flare up with some sort of richeousness, and they achieve…rightness? back to that again…achievement…what does it even mean?
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Mar 10, 2015
Mar 10, 2015 at 8:35 PM UTC
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