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oft on bus seated next, every one of your senses adjusting, modulating, to her unpredictable solar flaring you don't ever risk that first missing            misstep, your entirety is sun bursted         (un)/consumed in unhappy joy of her consuming presence ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you laugh years later re the topic of your first shaky foot in the mouth a classic misstep first bow shot, opening one liner and each storied retelling   is nature!s snow and rain refilling the love of your groundwater table welling up ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you love her scent the silly hats she wears, her short skirts arouse, that last open button a misstep invitation, angry it incenses, her every solitary everything is incense, pervading a daily co-riding passenger's oxygen? starved soul ~~~~~~~~~ her umbrella is a wet selfie stick accidentally opening and dousing an un random next door seatmate just another unlucky misstep for someone sitting next store, oil on the fire of happily ever after two selfies are last seen as one un selfishly toweling each other off and on with wet kisses ~~~~~~~~~~~ you eavesdrop on her earbud music, weep internally you do with crazed jealously The Temptations are so unfairly singing to her "Ain't to Proud to Beg" and neither are you you heart is misstepping to every beat, your fingers thrumming, you idiot, not quietly enough humming in the next seat the first, will not be the last smile exchanged ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ poem writing on the tablet, amidst the groaning awful no moving city traffic overheated bus combustible with winter snow dampness, wet dog sweat smelling people clothes all you want to do is get home shower off the daily dirt the poetry writing pastime is the place where you put yourself to better to pass over your sour surroundings her finger rattlesnakes, misstepping over, noisily invading, the invisible boundary constructed to hold up the eye-averting Keep Out sign to momentary, too neighborly strangers her red painted pointer finger smudge prints on your tablet, accompanied with bespoke words "try this" that smudge suggestion won't come off insisting on crediting a shared authorship, you ask for her email and cell, so you can share her forever co jointed tangled bus and bed sheet first efforts on writing, all about what you play~argue what should your entitled poem be titled you think endless short love story bus poems but she prefers, with red fingers persuading the first misstep is the best both see the merit in each other
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Mar 5, 2015
Mar 5, 2015 at 5:51 AM UTC
Endless Short Love Story Bus Poems / The First Misstep is the Best
oft on bus seated next, every one of your senses adjusting, modulating, to her unpredictable solar flaring you don't ever risk that first missing            misstep, your entirety is sun bursted         (un)/consumed in unhappy joy of her consuming presence ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you laugh years later re the topic of your first shaky foot in the mouth a classic misstep first bow shot, opening one liner and each storied retelling   is nature!s snow and rain refilling the love of your groundwater table welling up ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you love her scent the silly hats she wears, her short skirts arouse, that last open button a misstep invitation, angry it incenses, her every solitary everything is incense, pervading a daily co-riding passenger's oxygen? starved soul ~~~~~~~~~ her umbrella is a wet selfie stick accidentally opening and dousing an un random next door seatmate just another unlucky misstep for someone sitting next store, oil on the fire of happily ever after two selfies are last seen as one un selfishly toweling each other off and on with wet kisses ~~~~~~~~~~~ you eavesdrop on her earbud music, weep internally you do with crazed jealously The Temptations are so unfairly singing to her "Ain't to Proud to Beg" and neither are you you heart is misstepping to every beat, your fingers thrumming, you idiot, not quietly enough humming in the next seat the first, will not be the last smile exchanged ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ poem writing on the tablet, amidst the groaning awful no moving city traffic overheated bus combustible with winter snow dampness, wet dog sweat smelling people clothes all you want to do is get home shower off the daily dirt the poetry writing pastime is the place where you put yourself to better to pass over your sour surroundings her finger rattlesnakes, misstepping over, noisily invading, the invisible boundary constructed to hold up the eye-averting Keep Out sign to momentary, too neighborly strangers her red painted pointer finger smudge prints on your tablet, accompanied with bespoke words "try this" that smudge suggestion won't come off insisting on crediting a shared authorship, you ask for her email and cell, so you can share her forever co jointed tangled bus and bed sheet first efforts on writing, all about what you play~argue what should your entitled poem be titled you think endless short love story bus poems but she prefers, with red fingers persuading the first misstep is the best both see the merit in each other
I love this poem. I do. Lyrics to "Ain't to Proud to Beg" I know you wanna leave me, but I refuse to let you go If I have to beg and plead for your sympathy, I don't mind coz' you mean that much to me Ain't too proud to beg, sweet darlin Please don't leave me girl, don't you go Ain't to proud to plead, baby, baby Please don't leave me, girl, don't you go Now I heard a cryin' man, is half a man with no sense of pride But if I have to cry to keep you, I don't mind weepin' if it'll keep you by my side Ain't to proud to beg, sweet darlin Please don't leave me girl, don't you go Ain't to proud to plead, baby, baby Please don't leave me girl, don't you go If I have to sleep on your doorstep all night and day just to keep you from walkin' away let your friends laugh, even this I can stand cause I want to keep you any way I can Ain't too proud to beg, sweet darlin' Please don't leave me girl, don't you go Ain't to proud to plead, baby, baby Please don't leave me girl, don't you go Now I've gotta love so deep in the pit of my heart And each day it grows more and more I'm not ashamed to come and plead to you baby If pleadin' keeps you from walkin' out that door Ain't too proud to beg, you know it sweet darlin' Please don't leave me girl, don't you go Ain't to proud to plead, baby, baby Please don't leave me girl, don't you go Baby, baby, baby, baby (sweet darling)
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Mar 5, 2015
Mar 5, 2015 at 5:51 AM UTC
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