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O the rain yesterday Miriam says didn't it come down? I thought once in San Sabastian all would be well and then it poured I sit next to her in the camp cafe others from the coach were there some looked fed up with the weather I know the guide said to me and the ex-army guy there's your tent down in the field and it was pouring down with rain and we could hardly see and the ex-army guy says to me   what the heck I thought by coming here I'd get away from manoeuvres what's he like? she asks he's ok I guess I say bet you wish it was me in your tent? she says be a bit crowded three of us not with him just me and you o sure that'd go down a bundle with him and others I say but I like to think it was possible especially as the ex-army guy kept me awake a good part of the night moaning about his mother's new boyfriend and how he gets on his nerves and how the army was once his life anyway maybe later we can she says I nod and think of her on the journey down from Paris on the coach her next to me the dim lights on the coach through the Parisian night us kissing and such doing all right.
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Mar 2, 2015
Mar 2, 2015 at 1:44 AM UTC
DAMP CAMP 1970.
O the rain yesterday Miriam says didn't it come down? I thought once in San Sabastian all would be well and then it poured I sit next to her in the camp cafe others from the coach were there some looked fed up with the weather I know the guide said to me and the ex-army guy there's your tent down in the field and it was pouring down with rain and we could hardly see and the ex-army guy says to me   what the heck I thought by coming here I'd get away from manoeuvres what's he like? she asks he's ok I guess I say bet you wish it was me in your tent? she says be a bit crowded three of us not with him just me and you o sure that'd go down a bundle with him and others I say but I like to think it was possible especially as the ex-army guy kept me awake a good part of the night moaning about his mother's new boyfriend and how he gets on his nerves and how the army was once his life anyway maybe later we can she says I nod and think of her on the journey down from Paris on the coach her next to me the dim lights on the coach through the Parisian night us kissing and such doing all right.
A BOY AND GIRL ON THE ROAD PARIS TO SPAIN IN 1970.
terry-collett
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Mar 2, 2015 at 1:44 AM UTC
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