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Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much Limit your intake To save yourself from any future ache. Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much Eating more sweets Make you prone to diabetes. Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much Chocolates and cakes Could cause toothaches. Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much A hug and a kiss When gone, you would badly miss. Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much When your lover left you Heartaches will torment you. Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much It has been your sanity When gone, you'd go crazy. Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much Have a limited intake And you will not have any future ache.
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Feb 19, 2015
Feb 19, 2015 at 9:53 PM UTC
Too Much Sweetness
Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much Limit your intake To save yourself from any future ache. Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much Eating more sweets Make you prone to diabetes. Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much Chocolates and cakes Could cause toothaches. Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much A hug and a kiss When gone, you would badly miss. Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much When your lover left you Heartaches will torment you. Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much It has been your sanity When gone, you'd go crazy. Sweetness is detrimental When it is too much Have a limited intake And you will not have any future ache.
A poem I have written because of my toothache from eating too much sweets. Hope you enjoy reading! ;)
blythe
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Feb 19, 2015
Feb 19, 2015 at 9:53 PM UTC
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