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Stringent to lilly livered Toxic if afraid, galling to goers Who thrive on being brave, Enthralling to observers Who see finer tones, And fatal to loiterers With shrapnel in bones. Loose lips in the war zone An anathema to we Who strive for control In adversity. Loose lips in the war zone A systems relapse, Which preceeds establishment's Rapid collapse. Marshalg @the bach 11 May 2011
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May 10, 2011
May 10, 2011 at 6:38 PM UTC
Loose Lips in the War Zone
Stringent to lilly livered Toxic if afraid, galling to goers Who thrive on being brave, Enthralling to observers Who see finer tones, And fatal to loiterers With shrapnel in bones. Loose lips in the war zone An anathema to we Who strive for control In adversity. Loose lips in the war zone A systems relapse, Which preceeds establishment's Rapid collapse. Marshalg @the bach 11 May 2011
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May 10, 2011
May 10, 2011 at 6:38 PM UTC
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