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sugar i am carried on lofty currents, days like this. days evaporating, caught in tumult. hands, caught between bricks. banks of simmering stormcloud. outside, in the throes of daisy-speckled fields, i am found with the taste of your syllables tucked just behind the lip. thought convolving, shifting dot, position, tangent; no simple question. just combination: these speckles i know, the silhouette of your face in each blink. the warmth of this soft hum, when i sing, to the world, of your radiant heart.
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Feb 15, 2015
Feb 15, 2015 at 7:50 AM UTC
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sugar i am carried on lofty currents, days like this. days evaporating, caught in tumult. hands, caught between bricks. banks of simmering stormcloud. outside, in the throes of daisy-speckled fields, i am found with the taste of your syllables tucked just behind the lip. thought convolving, shifting dot, position, tangent; no simple question. just combination: these speckles i know, the silhouette of your face in each blink. the warmth of this soft hum, when i sing, to the world, of your radiant heart.
is this too sappy is this too obvious
tom-mccone
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Feb 15, 2015
Feb 15, 2015 at 7:50 AM UTC
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