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• X is the one in your mind • Y is the one that you see • Z is the anonymous a. If you slowly start seeing Y in a different way than what it used to be for you because of X; then you have a new way of looking at Y because of X and X is the one that makes you realize a new self in yourself which makes you see a new Y. b. If you start loving Y if and only if a. is true then it is also true that X is the trigger where love comes through • This may mean that (me) the one that loves, has actually been willing to love by the foundation of a new self through X either will it be a thing (tile, candle, tin, window …) or living (elephant, boy, girl, teacher, …). • So love becomes an inevitable thing for the one that loves (me). c. If the interaction between X, Y and of course (me) makes (me) slowly realize the existence of a ‘Z’ then Z becomes what I have been longing for as the new love and life combines. • Z is secret and as a result discovered secretly. • The secret discovery is by (me) and this is also what creates Z as a truth – a truth only perceivable by (me)as ‘freedom’ – which (me) will be able to communicate to others (this makes Z exist for others but in another way than it is for (me)). So then the question is which one is my Valentine? X, Y or Z? Or even (myself)? Notes: • X is the one in your mind and not the one that you have seen • Y is the one that you see and since the discovery of X you realized that Y has not been the one in your mind anymore
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Feb 14, 2015
Feb 14, 2015 at 11:04 AM UTC
Imagine a Valentine
• X is the one in your mind • Y is the one that you see • Z is the anonymous a. If you slowly start seeing Y in a different way than what it used to be for you because of X; then you have a new way of looking at Y because of X and X is the one that makes you realize a new self in yourself which makes you see a new Y. b. If you start loving Y if and only if a. is true then it is also true that X is the trigger where love comes through • This may mean that (me) the one that loves, has actually been willing to love by the foundation of a new self through X either will it be a thing (tile, candle, tin, window …) or living (elephant, boy, girl, teacher, …). • So love becomes an inevitable thing for the one that loves (me). c. If the interaction between X, Y and of course (me) makes (me) slowly realize the existence of a ‘Z’ then Z becomes what I have been longing for as the new love and life combines. • Z is secret and as a result discovered secretly. • The secret discovery is by (me) and this is also what creates Z as a truth – a truth only perceivable by (me)as ‘freedom’ – which (me) will be able to communicate to others (this makes Z exist for others but in another way than it is for (me)). So then the question is which one is my Valentine? X, Y or Z? Or even (myself)? Notes: • X is the one in your mind and not the one that you have seen • Y is the one that you see and since the discovery of X you realized that Y has not been the one in your mind anymore
An older poem I wrote in 2009. I guess nobody read it yet or felt like reading. LOL! Happy to  be able to share it with you here today.
dnalumuland
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Feb 14, 2015
Feb 14, 2015 at 11:04 AM UTC
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